Reports are trickling in that some folks have already gotten through the initial two chapters! Please post your constructive criticism in the “Comments” section of the “Sample Chapters” page. Remember that the text of this “first edition” will not be frozen, so to speak, until the impending E-book publication (which I’m feverishly working on.) That means I can still introduce revisions if any problems are found–so help an artist out!
Below, another vision of the office building of Domino & Wright, the woman protagonist’s place of work.